oooh, i've read it now, maybe i'm getting old and maybe its having children but far to much F, C, B for me these days, but i do still think its funny and i can see you have a target audience.
i think what i like most about it is your ability to create the idea, i can see as you are writing you're THERE, part of the story, we all swear but i try to keep it not in every sentence.
reading it has given me some ideas about story telling with my kids as your creativeness and ability to think outside the square is great and i love that about humanity.
tim