melbourneflorist DCA

[findtim]

hi, its currently sitting on a test domain and maybe a week away from completion but would like so critical appraisal.

(note: i'm not online tuesday so no reply doesn't mean i am ignoring you)

http://www.melbournehospitalflorist.com.au/ , soon to replace melbourneflorist.com.au which we currently have ranking first page for EMD search.

it would be great to get your search result for the term "melbourne florist" just so my system isn't lying to me.

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things to note:
drop down main nav still needs added "flowers by price" , flowers by occasion.

haven't put specials in yet

footer is obviously not done

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thanks

tim

 

[johno69]

I'm not a fan of the menu font, but that's just me. Seems a bit small.

Check the responsive break points of the logo, could do with some tweaking.

http://ipadpeek.com/

iPad in portrait hides the phone number behind the search bar.

The rest looks nice and clean Tim. Well done.

 

[johno69]

In the select boxes for the options on all products, Thankyou should be two words. Thank You.

 

[findtim]

cool, thanks for that link, VERY handy.

weird, but on my Ipad it shows correct?

if anyone else could use their own ipads and give me feedback that would be great.

thanks johno69

tim

 

[findtim]

In the select boxes for the options on all products, Thankyou should be two words. Thank You.

me bad anglish

 

[Ashman]

1. I would make the telephone number the same dark colour.
2. I would use an image border for your featured products to make them stand out more on the front page.
3. Shorten text on front page.

Otherwise I like it.

 

[johno69]

1. I would make the telephone number the same dark colour.

Could go further and make the phone number text. That would be beneficial too.

 

[Data Glasses]

domain appraisal or website appraisal ......

 

[helloworld]

3. Shorten text on front page.

Otherwise I like it.

Agree with this. You don't need that much. Create internal pages and link to them.

 

[findtim]

domain appraisal or website appraisal ......

yes, i was tossing a coin on that one, it was website appraisal, probably should have put in the dev section
tim